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Vortex Space (Free verse) by blackthoughtz1
Through the wild wondering phases and obscenities, my mind perplexed/ fierce fires of passion dance as hell dwells in the deepest depths of me/ silhouette envisioned visible your touch invades my sea/forbidden fantasies at light speed race/as you lunar eclipse my vortex space/ battling your erotic gravitational pull/lost/blackhole/imprisoned in its magnetic field lost in your twilight zone/Jasmine to my Aladdin I've wished/I've wished/my wish true/eyes concealed, imagination an untamed stallion/I ride my magic carpet to a whole new world/your world/your sun shines engulfed in my galaxy/brightens/enlargens in response, enticed by the 360 degree rotation of my milky way/1st- heat intense initially/2nd- distance grows/recedes/for greater exploration/ecstasy victorious in the midst of the 3rd rock from the sun/pleasure-filled journey to a heavenly destination/sound barrier broken by I/as you reactivate the dormant with sweet pain between my thighs/muscles contract/feel me/ as if trying to get a grip on reality/repeatedly kissed by thick lips to greet you/ simultaneous to the thick hips that rise to meet you/charmin uncomparable to the cotton that lies beneath you/feel me/fill me and feel me as you fall into my overflowing sea of satisfaction/into my waterfalls of Niagara Falls/responsive to every request and desire of your body's calls/refusing to be partial/a thorough lover, I prefer to fulfill them all/arousing inactive sensations through thoughts of the interaction of chocolate and caramel complected creations/All things possible that originate in the imagination/fill me...and feel me.

Up the ladder: Born Of Hope
Down the ladder: You are my very Heart

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7962
Posted: October 19, 2004 6:00 PM PDT; Last modified: October 19, 2004 6:00 PM PDT
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