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Alone together apart (Free verse) by cpill
I want to grip you, rib press you
To twirl about you
Though busy concrete fields forgotten
Over the disregarded truth
Into our own time,
Always with you,
I always with you,
You always you
You make beauty
You leap about my walls letting light in
To cause growth
I hope you never stop!
You know hope
So I know to hope
Let me be you
Let me see you
Here or a thousand miles away
These eternal lands we can know apart
Alone together apart
With Always Together
Strength to pass to push though
Without heart or tests of desperation
Because, but simply:
I can not forget never
With you
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0397344
Overall Rank: 7128
Posted: October 16, 2004 6:57 AM PDT; Last modified: October 16, 2004 6:57 AM PDT
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