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Alone together apart (Free verse) by cpill
I want to grip you, rib press you To twirl about you Though busy concrete fields forgotten Over the disregarded truth Into our own time, Always with you, I always with you, You always you You make beauty You leap about my walls letting light in To cause growth I hope you never stop! You know hope So I know to hope Let me be you Let me see you Here or a thousand miles away These eternal lands we can know apart Alone together apart With Always Together Strength to pass to push though Without heart or tests of desperation Because, but simply: I can not forget never With you

Up the ladder: Jennifer won the war.
Down the ladder: Passing of Wind

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0397344
Overall Rank: 7078
Posted: October 16, 2004 6:57 AM PDT; Last modified: October 16, 2004 6:57 AM PDT
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