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Free verse № 113804

Alone together apart

Member since 2002 · Posted 16 Oct 2004 · 0 comments

I want to grip you, rib press you To twirl about you Though busy concrete fields forgotten Over the disregarded truth Into our own time, Always with you, I always with you, You always you You make beauty You leap about my walls letting light in To cause growth I hope you never stop! You know hope So I know to hope Let me be you Let me see you Here or a thousand miles away These eternal lands we can know apart Alone together apart With Always Together Strength to pass to push though Without heart or tests of desperation Because, but simply: I can not forget never With you

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