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WAR04 (Free verse) by Jody Conn
Young pawns die on crimson sand,
As old men bluster and make a stand.
Spinning ââ¦freedom, rights and noble deedâ¦â
While lining pockets and feeding greed.
They tally the dollars, we tally our dead.
The one constant being, the machine remains fed.
Oh heinous act, oh mortal sin,
Killing the future while nobody wins.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.25
Weighted score: 4.910598
Overall Rank: 9605
Posted: October 12, 2004 7:30 PM PDT; Last modified: October 12, 2004 7:30 PM PDT
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