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Feel Like A Failure (Free verse) by TearsOnRoses
These metallic chains that hold me back
Are becoming more resistant everytime I move.
And the intelligence that I lack
Makes me feel like a failure.
This illustrious fantasy that dwells in my mind
Is becoming more elaborate everyday.
And this unseen, invulnerable wall I hide behind
Makes me feel like a failure.
I see your vigilant eyes inquiring in the dark.
They lurk behind me wherever I journey.
Your eyes are like fire and they cast off a spark.
They make me feel like a failure.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.8
Weighted score: 5.095362
Overall Rank: 6112
Posted: October 3, 2004 5:14 PM PDT; Last modified: October 3, 2004 5:14 PM PDT
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