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Snake-Like Tube (Free verse) by T. Jonathron Remp
Welcome to the inside of my
Slithering snake-like tube,
This is where the ending of your days
Comes crashing down on the egg-like radiowaves
That are your heart(s(?))
Many times dragons (in stories)
Have multiple hearts
This is a game of huggable darts
Tragically finding the sunfire dazzle
Listen, don't razzle, to the tazzle minazzle.
Then the coffee will make much less sense.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5850
Posted: September 9, 2004 9:29 PM PDT; Last modified: September 9, 2004 9:29 PM PDT
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