Sunrise

Member since 2004 · Posted 8 Sep 2004 · 1 comment

The sun rises again Iâve seen another night Come and go The only twinkling Are the tears That stain my cheeks Once more I sleep none With only a memory Of my blissful dreams Darkness fades But the pain remains And my heart aches Alone as always No one to hold me In the chilled breeze

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[5] Blue Magpie 8-Sep-04/5:52 AM Reply

The line "Once more I sleep none" is so ungrammatic it pretty much ruins the rest of the poem, some punctuation would also help.