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Sunrise (Free verse) by TLRufener

The sun rises again I’ve seen another night Come and go The only twinkling Are the tears That stain my cheeks Once more I sleep none With only a memory Of my blissful dreams Darkness fades But the pain remains And my heart aches Alone as always No one to hold me In the chilled breeze

Blue Magpie 8-Sep-04/5:52 AM
The line "Once more I sleep none" is so ungrammatic it pretty much ruins the rest of the poem, some punctuation would also help.




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