love

Member since 2007 · Posted 14 Mar 2007 · 1 comment

Love is burning you can see it in her eyes. Love is burning you can hear it in his sighs. He feels so old beside Her and wonders how can this be? But love is timeless it has no boundaries. Love is burning, burning deep inside and it laughs at father time. So embrace it when its special its such rarity. Love is burning,burning, Burning deep inside.

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[5] richa 16-Mar-07/3:26 PM Reply

I don't thin the line breaks work here. With couplets there is little point in using enjambment. I would just write the first three couplets as follows:

Love is burning
you can see it in her eyes.

(or Love is burning you
can see it in her eyes).

Love is burning
you can hear it in his sighs.

(or Love is burning you
can hear it in his sighs).

He feels so old beside Her
and wonders how can this be?