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The Slacker (Free verse) by ThoughtfulSoul I would try harder but I can't
I would do something with my life but I can't
I would be happy if it didn't take so much effort
I would finish this poem if I had a little more drive
Up the ladder:
Semaphores from the Chaos
Down the ladder:
If she thinks if she believes
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Posted: July 31, 2007 8:05 AM PDT; Last modified: July 31, 2007 8:05 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.8814354 Overall Rank: 10000 137 view(s)
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