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New Year (Free verse) by emilyowey
New Year, I beg you, please be new.
I know the party started,
an hour or two too soon,
but I did not pop the cork.
I was waiting for you,
but life stepped in and I
tasted much too soon.
Be new, New Year, I 'm asking
I was saving the toast for you.
You promised and I listened,
but the bubbles would not wait.
I let it fill me, without you,
but knew it was not time.
I let it hurt me,
and I just don't know why.
I was given your pleasures,
before you were here-
It tasted sour without you...
Now you're here...and bitterness invades my mouth.
Be new to me, New Year,
for my newness is swept away.
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Posted: September 7, 2004 9:07 PM PDT; Last modified: September 7, 2004 9:07 PM PDT
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