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night travel

by Faulk

Member since 2004 · Posted 4 Sep 2004 · 3 comments

A single ray of light breaks through the clouds The children arise and uncover their mounds The sky turns black, the stars start to weep For all of the people shall die in their sleep Their hearts will grow dim, and their minds will go blank And their souls will arrive on the opposite bank They shall go through a tunnel as black as the night Even the angels will weep from the sight

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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 6-Sep-04/5:12 PM Reply
Uncover their mounds?
[n/a] Faulk › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 6-Sep-04/8:02 PM Reply
mound

\Mound\, n. A pile of earth, gravel, sand, rocks, or debris heaped for protection or concealment
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › Faulk 7-Sep-04/5:41 AM Reply
So have these children gone feral or something?