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Careless Sneezes (Free verse) by Venus Sitting alone
at a table for two,
with the pieces
of my heart
scattered recklessly
across the checkered tableclothâ¦
Dare I invite you
to join me,
knowing that merely
a careless sneeze
from you
could blow those pieces
to the ground?
Up the ladder:
orange crumble
Down the ladder:
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Posted: August 19, 2004 11:24 PM PDT; Last modified: August 19, 2004 11:24 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0596013 Overall Rank: 6716 Comments:
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amanda_dcosta @ 203.145.159.37
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13-Dec-05/8:44 PM
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My my... aren't you a very insecure person.
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