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The World Through One Eye (Free verse) by timtonio Bored.
I stare aimlessly out the window
Trying to lose myself within my own mind.
Time passes by.
Bored.
Do the countless, immobile blades of grass outside of my window feel
this?
Does my purring, imprisoned sidekick feel this?
Time passes by.
Boredom-
Loneliness harbors me.
Are you bored?
If so, let us dance togethor.
Let us trample this mutual boredom with our shuffling feet.
Nay, impossible! Improbable! this dream, partnership.
For if I was with you I would not be bored.
What would I be without the only thing I have?
Boredom.
And time passes by.
Up the ladder:
Missing Grand Miss.
Down the ladder:
Sosomizing My Way Into Heaven
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Posted: August 5, 2004 9:38 PM PDT; Last modified: August 5, 2004 11:18 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.2145653 Overall Rank: 4418 Comments:
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6-Aug-04/12:07 AM
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with one eye?
It was meant to be one "eye". The title represents what I am missing in this world because of loneliness and boredom.
That being the case, I delete my comment due to lack of understanding your poem on my part.
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