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Free verse № 110047

The World Through One Eye

by timtonio

Member since 2004 · Posted 5 Aug 2004 · Edited 5 Aug 2004 · 3 comments

Bored. I stare aimlessly out the window Trying to lose myself within my own mind. Time passes by. Bored. Do the countless, immobile blades of grass outside of my window feel this? Does my purring, imprisoned sidekick feel this? Time passes by. Boredom- Loneliness harbors me. Are you bored? If so, let us dance togethor. Let us trample this mutual boredom with our shuffling feet. Nay, impossible! Improbable! this dream, partnership. For if I was with you I would not be bored. What would I be without the only thing I have? Boredom. And time passes by.

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[6] New Life Drug 6-Aug-04/12:07 AM Reply
with one eye?
[n/a] timtonio 6-Aug-04/1:04 PM Reply
It was meant to be one "eye". The title represents what I am missing in this world because of loneliness and boredom.
[9] Dan garcia-Black › timtonio 7-Aug-04/8:40 AM Reply
That being the case, I delete my comment due to lack of understanding your poem on my part.