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thoughts of longings

Member since 2004 · Posted 29 Jul 2004 · 1 comment

Sometimes My thoughts haunt me Deep longings, high dreams Overwhelming compassion Selfish My mind lurks in Evil desires, complicated notions A whirlpool of ghostlike thoughts My enemy, my friend I should turn off My mind, stop the voices But then, all of me Will in the drastic process Become mute.

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[10] frdup717 29-Jul-04/8:40 PM Reply
this is one of the best i've read in a while