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thoughts of longings (Free verse) by katinchina Sometimes
My thoughts haunt me
Deep longings, high dreams
Overwhelming compassion
Selfish
My mind lurks in
Evil desires, complicated notions
A whirlpool of ghostlike thoughts
My enemy, my friend
I should turn off
My mind, stop the voices
But then, all of me
Will in the drastic process
Become mute.
Up the ladder:
Winged Victory
Down the ladder:
Gone
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Posted: July 29, 2004 8:20 AM PDT; Last modified: July 29, 2004 8:20 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.0794687 Overall Rank: 6419 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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frdup717 @ 4.29.181.60
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29-Jul-04/8:40 PM
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this is one of the best i've read in a while
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