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How Strange (version two) (Free verse) by T.Becquerel II
I met a man once He wanted my words But didn't say it; He yearned for them Without knowing. He made a noise, Perhaps it was a cry, Perhaps his Typical emotional waterfall Had made him The messenger of Humanity. So I wrote my words On a piece of paper, Folded it, And began to hand it to him, But his arm Had already Been wrenched From his body.

Up the ladder: tobago, my tara
Down the ladder: -no title-

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.4375
Weighted score: 4.5045514
Overall Rank: 12790
Posted: April 23, 2002 10:13 PM PDT; Last modified: April 23, 2002 10:13 PM PDT
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[10]... anonymous @ | 26-Apr-02/10:14 AM | Reply
Say what? Why did you give him your words if you disdained him so? And what does his arm being wrenched from his body have to do with anything?
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