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-no title- (Free verse) by smilja_trenu...
It???s grey everywhere, It???s grey for days, You are pretending That you don???t care But I know all those Old fakes of yours Everything is seen We cry the same tears Come on, relax Sing it out loud Don???t be afraid You know the crowd Move me, Call me, Activate my receptors, Install software of desire Take me there Where I know nobody And still It is called home ???How far would one have to go to loose the track back home???? Bring me back to my own world Find me a corner on this Earth And I???ll be gratefull my whole life For you did what you musn???t have done What in no case you mustn???t have done???

Down the ladder: Imagine

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.142857
Weighted score: 4.5005374
Overall Rank: 12796
Posted: July 11, 2002 8:56 AM PDT; Last modified: July 11, 2002 8:56 AM PDT
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 | 4-Aug-02/8:51 PM | Reply
Install software of desire...hmm... well it looks like you're the 123123135234895723th person to use the sex/computer metaphor. Congratufuckinglations.
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