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Dawn Jig (Sonnet) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
> Endless nights unwind in Paris. The day transpires nonetheless. What mercy can you spare me, on a cold night like tonight. Perhaps a jar of brine, or just a kiss. Or nine. A conch sounds, whilst a mime forms hollow gestures, performed with niether ordacity nor finesse. Apparently .

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.571429
Weighted score: 5.153681
Overall Rank: 5206
Posted: July 14, 2004 3:59 PM PDT; Last modified: July 14, 2004 3:59 PM PDT
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[10] Stephen Robins @ 213.146.148.199 | 15-Jul-04/6:18 AM | Reply
This is haunting enough to send a shiver down Christopher Reeves spine. 1--1
[3] Blue Magpie @ 212.205.251.7 | 5-Sep-04/9:35 AM | Reply
Could you explain how this gets to be called a sonnet???????????
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