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Going Camping (Free verse) by jessicazee
Death should be quick like a campfired moth, disappearing wings. An ash so light, flying then dying toward the canopy of knowing trees. The only bit in vision above furtive flames, never mind the space holes of meteor shower dark, the glimmer of the outhouse a few sites down, where the stars drip all night long and the blackberry bushes whisper your secret nickname. You see the brambles first, Too close to the fruit to notice.

Up the ladder: Camping
Down the ladder: Pisan pizza

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.976287
Overall Rank: 8304
Posted: July 8, 2004 10:20 PM PDT; Last modified: July 8, 2004 10:20 PM PDT
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