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Going Camping (Free verse) by jessicazee
Death should be quick
like a campfired moth,
disappearing wings.
An ash so light,
flying then dying
toward the canopy
of knowing trees.
The only bit in vision
above furtive flames,
never mind the space holes
of meteor shower dark,
the glimmer of the outhouse
a few sites down,
where the stars drip all night long
and the blackberry bushes
whisper your secret nickname.
You see the brambles first,
Too close to the fruit to notice.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.976287
Overall Rank: 8304
Posted: July 8, 2004 10:20 PM PDT; Last modified: July 8, 2004 10:20 PM PDT
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