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Restraint (Free verse) by ThoughtfulSoul The life of a man who hasn't lived life
The voice of a man who doesn't speak
The heart of a man who doesn't love
Emptiness swallows this man and emptiness swallows
his soul
This man cannot see what is in front of him
because he has chosen to see only what he wants to
He lives his life in seclusion and will only be happy
with the shadows that dance with the devil
For his life has been wasted with no one but himself
He has not enjoyed life to the fullest
And for that will enjoy the after life so much more
Up the ladder:
Finest Hour
Down the ladder:
Buzzards
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Posted: June 19, 2004 11:05 PM PDT; Last modified: June 19, 2004 11:05 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0715218 Overall Rank: 6565 Comments:
Can anyone enjoy life to the fullest?
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Is utterly fucked. But I'm not dead, so what the hell do I know? Nothing. Thats why I'm so god-damn good. Yeah, and red wine coats my lips that hang so vain so vain as I slice up a fatal vein, between snorts of cocaine, the skies dark... maybe it'll rain.
But what do I know? Nothing.
--Here, have a seven, I'm in a good mood, fuck it all--