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any (Free verse) by shazpen
it`s a bespin kind of sky-let me show you what
what`s the worst that can happen?
this tastes funny
i`ve done this before
why am I here?
only you baby
all invocations of discord
already suffering-lost before I leave my front door
castles when the day swings itself through the striped course
every seed at it`s maturation-then it`s decomposition-then it`s breeze
into the next shape-it`s new born-it`s new time view
in the heart of one whose dreams have fleshed out--bleeding sad romance
or second coming
spark a lighter choking for fluid like a bubble in the heart
got to have some light-watch the afterimage-then spark it again
crack the Egyptian eye fluid reciever-a monolith in fragments-eyes that
are searchlights
jump out of heat into fog-coughing out all three mouths and grinding
your limbs
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9602656
Overall Rank: 8600
Posted: June 16, 2004 3:38 PM PDT; Last modified: June 16, 2004 3:38 PM PDT
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