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Heroes of the Rodeo (Lyric) by Amber
Over the roarin' of the crowd And the anthem playin' loud Openin' ceremonies bring the flag flyin' high. Our heroes are nearby. The dust and the heat and the summer sun, Beyond the golden buckles and purses won Stands tribute to what they'd once begun. Our heroes are nearby. The boots and chaps and faded jeans Reincarnate legendary scenes, So long as their rodeo events don't die Our heroes are nearby. In every young cowboy there lies the spirit Of ane age old spark just rarin' to be lit, And shine upon those who created it- Our heroes from days gone by. They ride and rope in the shadows These ghosts of the rodeo For some claim to see 'em But we all know, our heroes are nearby. In every eight seconds and timed event For their young protege's it was meant. The pride that's echoed is heaven sent. Can you see 'em? Our heroes are nearby. Written for all the great rodeo heroes Be they retired or passed on From small country fairs to the National Finals, May their memories live on

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.0596013
Overall Rank: 6741
Posted: June 2, 2004 3:40 PM PDT; Last modified: June 2, 2004 6:26 PM PDT
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[n/a] electroman1979 @ 198.81.26.16 | 2-Jun-04/9:35 PM | Reply
wow, first, good poem as far as structure, but imagine how much better our society would be if we based our heroism on stuff that mattered? like Saints and living for God. where does rodoe get you after your dead?
[n/a] Amber @ 63.190.81.184 > electroman1979 | 3-Jun-04/12:42 PM | Reply
It could get you dead faster if you don't have someone to look up to and learn from.
[n/a] electroman1979 @ 198.81.26.49 > Amber | 3-Jun-04/6:50 PM | Reply
how is looking up to someone gonna make you live longer as far as the rodeo is concerned? chances are you would live longer not participating in rodeo. just my opinion is all
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