poemranker ::Venus Flytrap by herbgirlofbirkenau

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Free verse № 103760

Venus Flytrap

Member since 2004 · Posted 30 May 2004 · 1 comment

In the corner of my mind, It's midnight and you're climbing the stairs- reaching the top... pacify your hunger just a little bite... a feed so undeniable. There are so many things I cannot give to you- ...time gets in the way. I just won't set you down... you'll have to runaway... this venus flytrap bleeding soul clings on to its sour prey... Just a little taste of madness Give in, and I'll blur away. I'm drowning, drowning- deep sea swimming... just this once, be mine today. something about your voice makes me dizzy dizzy i want to coat you in honey and just watch you glisten until you run away... don't run away. let me go swimming, deep sea swimming... let me be your prey.

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[8] DR Limerick 31-May-04/12:32 AM Reply
this made me all floaty 8/10