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Venus Flytrap (Free verse) by herbgirlofbirkenau
In the corner of my mind, It's midnight and you're climbing the stairs- reaching the top... pacify your hunger just a little bite... a feed so undeniable. There are so many things I cannot give to you- ...time gets in the way. I just won't set you down... you'll have to runaway... this venus flytrap bleeding soul clings on to its sour prey... Just a little taste of madness Give in, and I'll blur away. I'm drowning, drowning- deep sea swimming... just this once, be mine today. something about your voice makes me dizzy dizzy i want to coat you in honey and just watch you glisten until you run away... don't run away. let me go swimming, deep sea swimming... let me be your prey.

Up the ladder: Adelaide
Down the ladder: as you are

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.4
Weighted score: 5.166884
Overall Rank: 5031
Posted: May 30, 2004 11:09 PM PDT; Last modified: May 30, 2004 11:09 PM PDT
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[8] DR Limerick @ 62.31.23.48 | 31-May-04/12:32 AM | Reply
this made me all floaty 8/10
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