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Venus Flytrap (Free verse) by herbgirlofbirkenau
In the corner of my mind, It's midnight and you're climbing the stairs-
reaching the top...
pacify your hunger
just a little bite...
a feed so undeniable.
There are so many things I cannot give to you-
...time gets in the way.
I just won't set you down...
you'll have to runaway...
this venus flytrap bleeding soul
clings on to its sour prey...
Just a little taste of madness
Give in, and I'll blur away.
I'm drowning, drowning-
deep sea swimming...
just this once, be mine today.
something about your voice makes me dizzy dizzy
i want to coat you in honey
and just watch you glisten
until you run away...
don't run away.
let me go swimming, deep sea swimming...
let me be your prey.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.4
Weighted score: 5.166884
Overall Rank: 5013
Posted: May 30, 2004 11:09 PM PDT; Last modified: May 30, 2004 11:09 PM PDT
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