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What's Wrong in Your World? (Lyric) by Enkidu
-1- It's all alright here in my head My fears are gone and most of them are dead I can't say you know What would you know about it? Instead of drying your eyes In shame Why don't you dust yourself off And play the game. Left my house in the morning The sun had just left my window *morning sun* Felt a droplet of Rain on my shoulder Couldn't make my day much colder *drops of rain* But I was busy thinkin' of you Didn't know my name Couldn't take the blame Left it all to shame chorus: What's wrong in your world That makes you this undone I'm your hostage But you ain't got no gun Put a bullet in me Put a bulletinme

Up the ladder: SHOT
Down the ladder: Irreversible

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.25
Weighted score: 5.029801
Overall Rank: 7289
Posted: May 25, 2004 6:48 AM PDT; Last modified: May 25, 2004 6:48 AM PDT
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