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Jade Milieu (Concrete) by Enkidu
The trees don't talk to me Anymore They like to keep their distance I can't T H Hide behind E any longer M I haven't seen another person for s o o o long third My gun is like a or maybe a way O T hand U The canvas above me Is a solid viridian i But I've been feeling blue for the L O N G E S T t m e

Up the ladder: Grandpa's boat
Down the ladder: lost memories

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 7.193176
Overall Rank: 28
Posted: May 21, 2004 11:51 AM PDT; Last modified: May 21, 2004 11:53 AM PDT
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[9] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 216.196.147.170 | 21-May-04/11:55 PM | Reply
Matter Piece. Absolute Matter!!! -9-
[10] lmp @ 141.154.134.3 | 5-Jun-07/2:49 PM | Reply
really like this one. captures the sentiment very well
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