poemranker ::Jade Milieu by Enkidu

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Jade Milieu

by Enkidu

Member since 2004 · Posted 21 May 2004 · Edited 21 May 2004 · 2 comments

The trees don't talk to me Anymore They like to keep their distance I can't T H Hide behind E any longer M I haven't seen another person for s o o o long third My gun is like a or maybe a way O T hand U The canvas above me Is a solid viridian i But I've been feeling blue for the L O N G E S T t m e

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[9] thepinkbunnyofdoom 21-May-04/11:55 PM Reply
Matter Piece. Absolute Matter!!! -9-
[10] lmp 5-Jun-07/2:49 PM Reply
really like this one. captures the sentiment very well