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Dizzy (Free verse) by erickvisions
Dizzy and falling down Dreaming now of her old town Bloodshot eyes mark her cries “Where have they all gone!?!” But new places and new faces come with dawn Wandering Nowhere to go Dead to her No more home Bleeding Dogs lick her wounds dry All she wants is to die No one left to keep her alive

Up the ladder: friend
Down the ladder: Artemis and the Rain

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 8062
Posted: May 18, 2004 11:23 PM PDT; Last modified: May 18, 2004 11:23 PM PDT
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[10] zodiac @ 67.240.155.84 | 19-May-04/3:15 AM | Reply
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