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Dizzy (Free verse) by erickvisions
Dizzy and falling down
Dreaming now of her old town
Bloodshot eyes mark her cries
âWhere have they all gone!?!â
But new places and new faces come with dawn
Wandering
Nowhere to go
Dead to her
No more home
Bleeding
Dogs lick her wounds dry
All she wants is to die
No one left to keep her alive
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 8018
Posted: May 18, 2004 11:23 PM PDT; Last modified: May 18, 2004 11:23 PM PDT
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