poemranker ::Dizzy by erickvisions

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Dizzy

Member since 2004 · Posted 18 May 2004 · 1 comment

Dizzy and falling down Dreaming now of her old town Bloodshot eyes mark her cries “Where have they all gone!?!” But new places and new faces come with dawn Wandering Nowhere to go Dead to her No more home Bleeding Dogs lick her wounds dry All she wants is to die No one left to keep her alive

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[10] zodiac 19-May-04/3:15 AM Reply
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