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DISTRUST OF LOVE (Free verse) by daggatolar
Undressed in naked words
All over invading and swelling our head
With everything good
We earn all these wealth of praises
Dishing out a free smile
With a "thank you" carved from
The flesh of our bloodfool heart
"YOU ARE WELCOMED" to the world
Turns out way away from the word
Love undressed into the naked flesh
Long after our robes are back on
Where is all the good world gone
Is it this baggage of biology
conspiring with life to caged me
For a new life-
Find love in fixing the world on
To fix us out of our own woman feel
To stew in the distrust of love
'Word is cheap'
How come even this must on love
Also play act
To feel only for words
Is all that is lovely in love
For we women
Beyond is border pain
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 8112
Posted: February 28, 2004 7:29 PM PST; Last modified: February 28, 2004 7:29 PM PST
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