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Free verse № 92647

DISTRUST OF LOVE

Member since 2004 · Posted 28 Feb 2004 · 0 comments

Undressed in naked words All over invading and swelling our head With everything good We earn all these wealth of praises Dishing out a free smile With a "thank you" carved from The flesh of our bloodfool heart "YOU ARE WELCOMED" to the world Turns out way away from the word Love undressed into the naked flesh Long after our robes are back on Where is all the good world gone Is it this baggage of biology conspiring with life to caged me For a new life- Find love in fixing the world on To fix us out of our own woman feel To stew in the distrust of love 'Word is cheap' How come even this must on love Also play act To feel only for words Is all that is lovely in love For we women Beyond is border pain

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