| Re: Crucify Spuna with a Forknostle by SupremeDreamer |
13-Feb-04/8:58 AM |
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spunafaNTASTICO ....wild carefree and positively biosterous in its wild abandon and exuberance did it have words i hardly noticed as i bounced along with it...magnificent spunas 'r' us
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13-Feb-04/3:27 PM |
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its very emotional and the spelling in it is amazing and quite lends itself to someone who is on the edge and isnt bothered about spelling so it adds to the intensity and feeling
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| Re: Might by A. Nomaly |
13-Feb-04/3:29 PM |
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i love anything on a bus nice write
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| Re: Might by A. Nomaly |
13-Feb-04/3:29 PM |
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i love anything on a bus nice write
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| Re: What I Wouldn't Give by jasondingus |
13-Feb-04/3:31 PM |
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if you lose the exclamation at the end it will have more impact i
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13-Feb-04/3:32 PM |
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bit bloody for me at the beginning but the rest was great...very emotional
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13-Feb-04/3:33 PM |
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13-Feb-04/3:34 PM |
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it was going great until that last stanza where the rhyming just got in the way
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| Re: The musician by richa |
13-Feb-04/3:36 PM |
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| Re: Black Snake by Butterflywriter |
13-Feb-04/3:37 PM |
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witty how it stops at the end
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15-Feb-04/7:16 AM |
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15-Feb-04/7:16 AM |
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15-Feb-04/7:16 AM |
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17-Feb-04/12:00 PM |
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very funny i thought but liable to offend some people which is probably why i like it a lot..
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17-Feb-04/3:06 PM |
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have you got any poems on All Poetry? i wouldnt mind reading some more of yours
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2-Mar-04/1:36 PM |
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sardonic sarcastic cynical cyanide words
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