Thank you so much everything you said made so much sense. I hope to work on some poems in the future and I would love for you to read them. You really seem to know what you are talking about. By the way may I ask of your age? You seem a whole lot wiser then I, this is why I ask. Thanks

Thanks for your advice though i do have one question, what is it that I am doing so wrong? I write poetry in school and all my teachers read it and approve that it is appropriate and well written?

I am unsure of the meaning of this poem.