As I said, I am a mere simpleton. Thanks for the correction. Don't sweat the Starbucks comment. Many feel you must be suffering to actually be creative. I liked it.

Thanks for the positive input. You're right...I changed line 15. The reason I believe I need the last line in the poem is because one often feels they have found that "dream" person, only to find out later they are not who you thought they were. I'm trying to draw this picture of someone actually opening their eyes and realizing this, while they have it. Make any sense at all?