| Re: Once the moon turned me into a hairy vagina by horus8 |
24-Jan-04/12:02 PM |
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Have to give credit for originality...but that's all.
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| Re: The Grandfather Suite by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
24-Jan-04/12:07 PM |
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I like how the poem is divided into sections. It makes one pause and reflect on each.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
24-Jan-04/12:35 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
24-Jan-04/12:52 PM |
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I guess I shall be labeled as simple minded as you Lydia, for I enjoyed your poem (third stanza gets applause) And to those so far above the rest of us, so what if it resembles a million others? Love/Hate are very common to write about. At least this poem makes sense, which is more than I can say for some of yours. Poetry isn't just about writing large words in succession, it's writing about your feelings, and putting feeling into your peom. A poem is no good, unless one walks away from it with a sense of the writer's point of view. And as for William Blake...sometimes simplicity is best.
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| Re: His Master's Jodhpurs by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
24-Jan-04/1:06 PM |
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No idea what Jodhpurs are...but once I reached the second stanza the poem had my full attention straight through the end.
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