regarding some deleted poem...	13-Jun-05/6:31 AM
m a s t u r b a t o r
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Jun-05/1:46 PM
good and funny
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Jun-05/2:29 PM
Maybe I am getting punchy from all the bad stuff, but this beats all so far!
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Jun-05/3:04 PM
I feared you had lost it for a while, but this is a fine poem. I enjoyed reading most of your stuff. Some got a bit boring, but, this site does not actually invite excellence with open arms, rather the reverse.
regarding some deleted poem...	14-Jun-05/10:39 PM
This is bad. Real bad.
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Jun-05/10:05 AM
This is pretentious garbage. I rate the postings. I am not about to write your 'poem' by telling you word for word what is wrong. There are a lot of people who are helpful in that direction. I do not see any way to help this posting. It is bad. You are not good enough to deserve the zero I give you.
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Jun-05/10:06 AM
sight hold-breath shoot
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Jun-05/10:07 AM
more than overdone subject and badly done to boooot
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Jun-05/10:08 AM
watch away
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Jun-05/10:15 AM
You are just another whining fool. I rate other 'poets'. Someday you might be one if you allow ignorance and self-masturbatory-love dissipate. This is what I get from your 'poetry'. This is how you get better. This is my advice to you. You are welcome to read and rate my poetry. I write poetry.
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Jun-05/10:27 AM
ritter! How Many clones of you are there? You are probably not as liked as you think. You PICK AND CHOOSE what you see. I rate 'poetry' on this site. I am not your teacher. I do not want to be your teacher. I have set myself the task of reading and rating every posting here except my own. Scream. Hide your head under the covers! You post it. I'll rate it. Write a real poem. Or Well You Could Remain a *PATHETIC WHINER*.
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Jun-05/10:42 AM
Just another self-absorbed person. Go chase your frisbee critter. Do you roll over and shake hands on command? I hope your physical being is healthier than your mental one. There is a difference between reading and rating. You have not rated anything. I doubt you are capable of getting that far out of yourself.
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Jun-05/12:27 PM
Yes. You have been here two days. Already you are giving orders as to how you should be treated. Personally, I do not care if you read or rate other poets. You will find some of the top poets are the same person and are only at that rating by rigging the vote. This site is an unregulated democracy. As such, you can have as many logons as you wish and can hold long discourses with yourself as some people do. As to your worth as a poet... Whatever gave you the idea that you were good? Have you actually read any? Again I don’t care. You may define an object or thing as you wish; it does not make it so. The whole-in-the-sand you have your head stuck in is going to be awfully difficult to get out of with the amount of swelling caused by self stroking. I can’t respect you. First there must be some substance. Anyway, you asked for this discourse, I was willing to merely give your poems their vastly over-rated zero. You are far from a pleasant person.
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Jun-05/1:21 PM
Whine and Whimper. In my experience people tend to gravitate towards those who pet them. You are obviously not very intelligent. I know this statement means nothing to you. It is beyond your understanding perhaps. Your answer to honest critique is to desire to smash me with your fists. Such a wonderful critter you are. I can understand why everyone likes you. Such a PATHETIC WHINING BRAT. Do you hold your breath until you pass out blue on the floor? It is nice that you considered rating me. None of your votes will register if you are not loged on. Not that they are not applied, just that anonymous is hard to be.
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Jun-05/1:41 PM
I am not going to pet you. It does not matter how much you beg. I did not say anything about your friends other than to say that you personally gravitate towards what masturbates your ego or strokes your belly. I have no interest in what other people think of you or how you get off on them. As a poet, you are not! That is a very simple statement. WHINE WHIMPER MOAN, I sure am glad I have never known you. That is, until now, and what a messed up nastily constructed little piece of work you are.
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Jun-05/4:46 PM
Okay dimmer than dim whit, you post it I rate it. And since you insisted, I comment. If you do not want to be rated by me, don't post. I am not telling you not to post, just that I know you are hiding in your bed with the covers over your head. I see you. Peek-A-Boo.
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Jun-05/6:59 PM
I did critique your stuff. What you seem to be saying is that if I have nothing nice to say about the crap you write or am unwilling to write it for you, to keep my opinion to myself. There is no improvement you can make on this crap. You are self-delusional. You are bad. Your 'poems' are bad. I will tell you this each time you post crap. Write good stuff, I give you a higher vote. You are so far below the zero line now that I doubt you can do it.
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Jun-05/7:44 PM
I refer you to my comments. I told you begging is pathetic. A critique is....cri•tique Audio pronunciation of "critique" ( P ) Pronunciation Key (kr-tk) n. 1. A critical review or commentary, especially one dealing with works of art or literature. 2. A critical discussion of a specified topic. 3. The art of criticism. You only want to be petted. petted petted petted I will not sully my metaphorical hand. It does not matter how many people have a wrong opinion. I.E., it does not matter how many people think you are pretty or think this crap is poetry or that you are even a nice person. What matters is that I think you are a self-delusional narcissistic child. You seem to think that you have attained maturity. Pretty funny idea. Well, fondle yourself enough and….. you know how the story goes!
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Jun-05/8:47 PM
I do not take orders. Stop Whining! Write something decent, read some other post, rate somebody or do something creative. Begging me to treat you as you desire to be treated is rather retarded behavior. There is something fundamentally wrong with you.
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Jun-05/6:50 AM
My only loss is having had to read your crap. I have to read it because you post it. There are no points to be made. If you can't write poetry, rate poetry, read poetry...WHY ARE YOU HERE? You are very stupid. I was willing to merely zero out your crap. All you want to do is sit in you shitty diaper and say how sweet you smell. Well, sit there and smell your shit. Enjoy it. It will not change. What a waste you are.