regarding some deleted poem...	9-Oct-03/8:22 AM
You are a master of the chill! I thought at first dipsy kismet and then I thought stalker and then back to fate. Delicious bit of (I thought Irony, but that certainly is not the word.)
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Oct-03/8:37 AM
I am disgusted to the extreme with this character. Mayhaps sympathy was trying to be evoked. I did not feel it.
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Oct-03/12:23 PM
This one I just found boring.
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Oct-03/12:29 PM
Within a dang... Is that like 'don't give a dang (slang for damn)? Even if it is a typo, this just does not do it for me. I am clearly not smart enough for the last line.
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Oct-03/2:24 PM
Don't know what a Jonquil is.
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Oct-03/2:26 PM
Good capture "i feel old..."
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Oct-03/4:33 PM
and apple peels hang noses... I an't help but laugh. Nice image.
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Oct-03/6:51 PM
Reincarnation with a twist. You are your own soul Mate?
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Oct-03/10:29 PM
This only grated. Only annoyed.
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Oct-03/10:30 PM
Redundant and trite.
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Oct-03/10:43 PM
Too many we's. Too much demanded acceptance of poet's view.
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Oct-03/10:59 PM
The warmth of felt. ... Nice touch.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Oct-03/12:35 PM
I am in awe of your imagery.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Oct-03/4:29 PM
Nicely and humorously done.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Oct-03/4:47 PM
Haiku is way beyound me, so I can not comment on form. It does make me feel sadness for both parties with the few words you used.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Oct-03/5:01 PM
I have heard this all before...endlessly by lots of people. So what if it is lyrical?
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Oct-03/8:25 PM
. TGT AAA ACG ACG GCC AGT. M13-47. CGC CAG GGT TTT CCC AGT CAC GAC. M13-REV4. TCA CAC AGG AAA CAG CTA TGA C. --- Not being versed in genetics, I got this off the net. I think your poem is very funny. Is your code hopelessly scrambled or do you have a pattern in it? Regardless, have a 10.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Oct-03/8:43 PM
I suspected something different in the beginning. This caught me of guard. Very good. Very chilling!
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Oct-03/12:11 PM
Just testing to see if a message by me is sent to me.
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Oct-03/10:23 PM
I can't quite tell if this is telling someone off and expecting a continued relationship or it is a very long good-bye, don't let the door slam too hard on your backside as you get going kind of thing. It is certainly nicely said... both in execution and choice of language. A gentle farewell? A polite go to hell? Or knowing my abilty to miss the point, neither or both. Have a 10.