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regarding some deleted poem... 24-Sep-03/10:53 PM
I liked it. I sense a bit of sarcasm. I'm SUCH a sucker for a good quick quip or two...but that's not the point. The more I read the more I smiled, because I know how people can be.
Re: Care Bears in Bondage by Kamikaze 24-Sep-03/11:42 PM
Simply love it. Sex and violence in the media. Who can go wrong?
Re: Faith by Pervy Elf 6-Jan-04/8:32 PM
Okay, first off, I'm not a guy. I'm most definately a girl...but that's not the point. I just want to clear some things up about this poem since everybody seems to be so up in arms about the damn thing. Let's make this clear, this is *just* a poem. What people may interpret from the contents is thier right, but do not berate them for it. Yes, I understand that at first glance I seem to be 'bashing' God. I never did that. The lines "Your God is a lie/Your God is a fake" are refering to that persons ideal of thier God. Contents of this poem are for those who feel that they must push thier beliefs onto others in an attempt to make thier logic appear concrete. It is quite illogical for an all-powerful being to be able to make our lives better just because we believe in him. From a logical standpoint, it doesn't make sense. Note, nowhere have I discredited God's existence or blatently ridiculed anybody for thier beliefs.
Secondly, I never stated that I was molested as a child. If you happened to read my poem and discern that fact, then I am grateful that you may have been able to somehow relate to my poem. I appologize if I have misslead anyone.
I am very saddened that this forum was not used as a place for *constructive* criticism for my poetry, but a place where others are subjected to malice for thier beliefs.


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