| Re: To a bum, by RealmOfSong |
5-Sep-03/4:23 PM |
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a bum indeed..."i've seen what you look like under the stage paint"...that line was perfection
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| Re: Snowball by INTRANSIT |
5-Sep-03/4:31 PM |
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ah, so much in so words...concise,compact. Kind of slaps you around and pins you down, i like that
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
5-Sep-03/5:00 PM |
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my first thought was along the lines of 'yeah dude rock on for Christ' but i don't think that merely trying to be "good" will get you into heaven..there's no focus on forgiveness of sins...9.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
5-Sep-03/5:08 PM |
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articulate, beautiful..."looking for clues in a book of long forgotten text"...i do the same every day...a deep, insightful piece, i like.9.
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| Re: Babelfish Poetry (II): Rendu plus Doux (Français) by Geschäftsreise |
6-Sep-03/7:49 PM |
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| Re: One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined |
6-Sep-03/7:56 PM |
vermicular in a very good way
10.
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| Re: Only in humility by mozac |
21-Sep-03/8:25 PM |
makes me feel inadequate, somehow
works like this make me wonder why i even bother writing
8/10
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| Re: Holding on for Jesus by Everyone |
26-Nov-03/5:39 PM |
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hooollldin' onn for Jeeesuss....i can practically hear the music
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