regarding some deleted poem...	27-Jul-03/12:15 PM
tragic
Re: missing time (revised) by Bill Z Bub	6-Sep-03/4:59 PM
Very nice, but changing from "she/her" to "you" was a little confusing. 9
Re: A very special thank you to a very special someone by Livvie	6-Sep-03/5:03 PM
Hmm. Ancestor or infant or someone else? I think the idea of Whitney Houston's "I will always love you" takes away from the piece.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Sep-03/5:05 PM
Yes, a statement.
Re: (untitled) by http://bandgeek	6-Sep-03/5:07 PM
title ideas anyone, or other constructive feedback?
Re: Babelfish Poetry (II): Rendu plus Doux (Français) by Geschäftsreise	7-Sep-03/6:45 AM
beau, dans cela a maladroitement traduit la manière.
Re: Babelfish Poetry (I): A pérola (Português) by Geschäftsreise	7-Sep-03/7:19 AM
Welcher Fremdsprache? Nicht italienisch oder spanisch?
Re: Babelfish Poetry (III): Segen (Deutsch) by Geschäftsreise	7-Sep-03/1:22 PM
Welcher bist du? Reisender? Arbeiter? Denker? Schöpfer, oder alles? Selbstportrait?
Re: My Id and I by William Delacroix	7-Sep-03/1:34 PM
Very nice. I liked the simpler sections "My id and I..." contrasted with the more explanatory stanzas, and how the id induced desires lacked punctuation. You could turn this in for a Psychology 101 assignment.