replying on Class Life by lorigan85
17 Jul 2003, 8:27 AM
hey dude, thanks for your constructive criticism, serious, thats helpful. i wrote this listening to eminem music, and i suppose writing in the mood i was in was described precisely in your use of "jumble of raw emotion" cheers . ;)
replying on Class Life by lorigan85
17 Jul 2003, 5:39 AM
? listen guys im sorta in a bad mood, feeling abit jaded im sure u've had the feeling..about school, life, and the HSC. But i wasnt expecting someone to go "that was horrible" , aint no confidence boosters to anyone..so yeh sorry if i sound like a bitch i just thought it might make sense even to 1 other person.
on Goodbye by Sunshine Conkey
17 Jul 2003, 1:05 AM
short and sweet.
replying on Class Life by lorigan85
17 Jul 2003, 1:03 AM
that was horrible? wheres the constructive criticism? jesus how can someones feelings be so 'fucking horrible' an 11 out of what 100? gee dude if u feel that way keep ur opinions out of it. not everyone is pros. i just started writing and i aint making no excuses neither cos i enjoy it and i think thats what poetry is all about, so the bottom line is shut the fuck up, ok?