on Torment by ThoughtfulSoul
18 Oct 2003, 3:28 AM
Turn your torment to a torrent and cry me a river
With such a power title you promised what you failed to deliver
With such a power title you promised what you failed to deliver
on You must enter a title for your poem about lebsians! by OnTheOtherHand
18 Oct 2003, 2:45 AM
Working title of course.
replying on A Fine Day To Exit by OnTheOtherHand
17 Oct 2003, 12:43 PM
Thanks. I know that rhyme is lame but I had no where to go with it.
on The first Poeme by Everyone by Everyone
17 Oct 2003, 2:43 AM
Gayness
replying on Tailor Made by OnTheOtherHand
5 Oct 2003, 9:46 PM
Umm... the suit was green.
I mentioned it because I couldn't tell. I can't tell green from yellow. It's all about things you can't tell until too late
I mentioned it because I couldn't tell. I can't tell green from yellow. It's all about things you can't tell until too late
replying on Tailor Made by OnTheOtherHand
3 Oct 2003, 7:19 PM
You make me laugh. Point is it's my poem and the comments section is supposed to be for comments about the poem.
Now do you care to talk about the poem? You did give it a ten...
Now do you care to talk about the poem? You did give it a ten...
replying on Tailor Made by OnTheOtherHand
3 Oct 2003, 6:39 PM
It certainly has nothing to do with your poems. I don't have a vendetta against you. I think your poems are bunk and I don't like the comments you make on other people's work is worse. I've stopped reading your work because there is nothing of interest to me in any that I have read. I told you what I thought and left it at that. Making a statement in no way means that I am peeved. If you were to actually comment on something then it would be left up. Making up your own story beside my work isn't going to cut it.
replying on Tailor Made by OnTheOtherHand
3 Oct 2003, 6:10 PM
No but my poems are not a canvas for you. Either comment on the poem or don't. Your "Look at me, I'm cutely abstract" postings can go somewhere else.
on Tailor Made by OnTheOtherHand
3 Oct 2003, 6:07 PM
Dear DA,
Thank you for the ten but your comment isn't welcome here. I've played the post, delete, repost, redelete game with you before. Let's not do it again.
Love,
OFA
Thank you for the ten but your comment isn't welcome here. I've played the post, delete, repost, redelete game with you before. Let's not do it again.
Love,
OFA
replying on Tailor Made by OnTheOtherHand
3 Oct 2003, 5:58 PM
Symbolism. It's all in the symbolism.
replying on Snake Oil: A Deadication by OneFingerAnswer
31 Jul 2003, 4:57 AM
I tried ignoring her but she just laid there crying. It's been about 4 and half hours now so I called the police and they told me that I had to tell her that I had called them for some reason.
So I opened the door to tell her and she attacked me. Just as a natural reaction I grabbed her and pushed and she hit her head and has been out cold since. I don't know how this is going to play out so I might as well get ready for a trip to the police station.
So I opened the door to tell her and she attacked me. Just as a natural reaction I grabbed her and pushed and she hit her head and has been out cold since. I don't know how this is going to play out so I might as well get ready for a trip to the police station.
on I sat for an hour to watch a spider by Jimbo
29 Jul 2003, 9:00 PM
I like it but I think the metaphor at the end is just too blantent. Try being a little more subtle. 6
replying on A Fine Day To Exit by OnTheOtherHand
24 Jul 2003, 1:45 PM
The boy did get out. :)
He went and bought milk actually. Later he's playing catch with some other boys.
He went and bought milk actually. Later he's playing catch with some other boys.
replying on A Fine Day To Exit by OnTheOtherHand
24 Jul 2003, 12:07 PM
If you're not the one in the position then it doesn't matter if you agree does it?
I'm not trying to be an asshole, just saying that if a person has cut himself off from other people and is thinking about killing himself, who's thoughts is he going to use to make the decision?
I'm not trying to be an asshole, just saying that if a person has cut himself off from other people and is thinking about killing himself, who's thoughts is he going to use to make the decision?
replying on The War and Dance of The Undertaker by OnTheOtherHand
19 Jul 2003, 6:15 AM
I took out two stanzas that didn't add anything much. They didn't really work any way.
Hope you like it better now.
Hope you like it better now.
replying on The War and Dance of The Undertaker by OnTheOtherHand
19 Jul 2003, 6:04 AM
It means I was tired :P
replying on The War and Dance of The Undertaker by OnTheOtherHand
15 Jul 2003, 3:49 AM
Thanks. I hope you'll read it after I edit it :D
replying on The War and Dance of The Undertaker by OnTheOtherHand
15 Jul 2003, 3:11 AM
Yeah it's just a quick draft.
I'm going to get some rest then run a spell check and redraft.
Thanks. :)
I'm going to get some rest then run a spell check and redraft.
Thanks. :)
replying on How To Make Up Without Saying I'm Sorry by OnTheOtherHand
11 Jul 2003, 9:43 AM
Nah he was just a whiner living with a passive-aggressive BPD sufferer. We actually got along great because he could take these occasional out bursts as long as I followed them up with periods of guilt induced niceties.
Thanks for the Nine though.
Thanks for the Nine though.
Ok it's not really that bad but you're sugar coating makes me gag. Really now some families are like that but some are like the ones where the neigbor kid comes over to make sure the kid gets fed because the parents are too strung out to do it themselves and then the parents make the neighbor kid do things a nine year old shouldn't even know about. Others are like the one where the kid goes off to college and the parents move and don't bother telling the kid. Then you have the ones were the dad is long gone, the mother is just barely done giving birth and the baby is in a dumpster.