on The first Poeme by Everyone by Everyone
17 Oct 2003, 2:43 AM
Gayness
on You must enter a title for your poem about lebsians! by OnTheOtherHand
18 Oct 2003, 2:45 AM
Working title of course.
on Torment by ThoughtfulSoul
18 Oct 2003, 3:28 AM
Turn your torment to a torrent and cry me a river
With such a power title you promised what you failed to deliver
With such a power title you promised what you failed to deliver
on Family by ramtheman1
18 Oct 2003, 3:34 AM
What? Where do you live? Families are fariy tales lady.
Ok it's not really that bad but you're sugar coating makes me gag. Really now some families are like that but some are like the ones where the neigbor kid comes over to make sure the kid gets fed because the parents are too strung out to do it themselves and then the parents make the neighbor kid do things a nine year old shouldn't even know about. Others are like the one where the kid goes off to college and the parents move and don't bother telling the kid. Then you have the ones were the dad is long gone, the mother is just barely done giving birth and the baby is in a dumpster.
Ok it's not really that bad but you're sugar coating makes me gag. Really now some families are like that but some are like the ones where the neigbor kid comes over to make sure the kid gets fed because the parents are too strung out to do it themselves and then the parents make the neighbor kid do things a nine year old shouldn't even know about. Others are like the one where the kid goes off to college and the parents move and don't bother telling the kid. Then you have the ones were the dad is long gone, the mother is just barely done giving birth and the baby is in a dumpster.
on some deleted poem
18 Oct 2003, 3:43 AM
A poem about people does nothing but a pile of mud is percious enough to be compared to rape?
on I sat for an hour to watch a spider by Jimbo
29 Jul 2003, 9:00 PM
I like it but I think the metaphor at the end is just too blantent. Try being a little more subtle. 6
on some deleted poem
10 Jul 2003, 5:37 PM
0o0o0o0o0o0o Spookey guy. I'm so scared. At least most of this one made sense though. I'll give you a 4 for the effort.
on some deleted poem
10 Jul 2003, 5:15 PM
I've seen more grammatical correctness from a chimp on crack. If Shakespeare was written by monkeys with a typewriter, then this was likely a mule's fart that knocked over an ink well.
on Wanksta by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w
11 Jul 2003, 9:38 AM
It was much better before you changed the spellings.
on Tailor Made by OnTheOtherHand
3 Oct 2003, 6:07 PM
Dear DA,
Thank you for the ten but your comment isn't welcome here. I've played the post, delete, repost, redelete game with you before. Let's not do it again.
Love,
OFA
Thank you for the ten but your comment isn't welcome here. I've played the post, delete, repost, redelete game with you before. Let's not do it again.
Love,
OFA