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Re: a comment on It could be a vase.... by Joyleaf 29-Sep-02/8:40 PM
To be perfectly straight-forward, the object is a water pipe. But I don't use it for tobacco... I'm sorta defiant, that way.
Re: a comment on It could be a vase.... by Joyleaf 27-Sep-02/4:07 PM
Just curious... can you pick up on what it is? I was pretty confident that the object's true identity would be understood, but I'm reading it now, and I'm not sure.
Re: rules by roses are read 27-Sep-02/4:02 PM
Wow. This reminds me of why I don't miss high school. You have to throw the stupid rule book out the windo and start all over again for yourself. It's the only way to stay sane.
Re: a comment on A Day, Wasted by Joyleaf 27-Sep-02/12:09 PM
:) Excellent! Thank you!
Re: a comment on A Day, Wasted by Joyleaf 27-Sep-02/10:03 AM
Thanks! I know that it's not perfect, but the way it's stated is really sort of the way it happened--the world didn't make much sense, at the time. I mean, here you are, wrapped up in this warm blanket of friendship, fun, and chemicals. Then, suddenly, the blanket's stripped away, someone is splashing cold water on you and telling to wake the f*ck up, 'cause you're going to jail. Hell of a way for it all to end, really...


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