Re: a comment on My girl by simone_girard	23-May-03/8:07 PM
As I have said before, I never claimed to be the best writer in the world. Also as I have said before, this is not one of the best poems I have written. I think that if you feel so strongly about the way I have written this I would really like to see an example of how you would have written this. I have read some of the poetry you have written on this sight and you are a talented writer, so I would love to see a better version of this poem.
Re: a comment on My girl by simone_girard	23-May-03/8:02 PM
This is far from one of what I would consider my best poems. So I all but agree with your comment. But I would like to know who poetry.com is as I have never heard of them. From what you have written I am guessing they are some sort of internet scam company. I did not find a publisher via the internet, I found him by accident to be honest.
Re: a comment on Symbol Of Love by simone_girard	23-May-03/7:19 PM
What is it with you. Do you always have to stand up for Shardik. Is he so fucking dumb that he cant reply himself. As for your comments on my poetry I could care less what you think of it. The only reason it is her is so that people with an intelligent comment can have there say. This in idiots terms ( just for you and your bum buddy) means if you hate it tell me why and how to improve it. I am the first to admit that I am far from the greatest writer in the world. My spelling sucks, My vocab is pretty limited and my imagination is probably not vivid enough. But that doesnt mean that you or anyone else has the write to put shit on me. I put my poetry on here to have shit put on at at times, not me. If i wanted you or your friends to put shit on me I would have put myself on here.
Re: a comment on My girl by simone_girard	22-May-03/8:38 PM
Your poems and your comments have something in common. Neither of them make any sense.
Re: a comment on Symbol Of Love by simone_girard	22-May-03/8:34 PM
Firstly you fucking idiot, this poem was not written about my daughter. It is about my bestfriends daughter who died of SIDS. Secondly if the thought of fucking a 4 year old gets you off, I suggest you not worry about me being sterilized, unlike you who should have your penis removed. On the other hand Tynesha's daddy says feel free to leave your address, as he would love to fuck you up the arse with his size 14 boot. I think I would be right in thinking in every day life you are the person that no-one wants to know. You have very few friends and had a pretty shitty home life. That to me explains why you feel the need to put everyone else's writing down, to make yourself feel better.
Re: a comment on Dear Lord by simone_girard	22-May-03/8:20 PM
If there is something wrong with every line, please feel free to give me an example of how this should have been written. Up until having my poetry posted on this sight I have only ever had one or two bad comments in regards to my writting. I am always open to suggestions from those of you who are perfect writers, who have had at least 1 book published, and those of you who wish to tell me how to right my feelings and thoughts.
Re: a comment on My girl by simone_girard	22-May-03/7:29 PM
If that is the case, then you may want to go back to writing like you did at age ten. This poem has been chosen to be published. Not that I want to sound like a bitch, but it cant be all that bad if other published poets say it is good enough.