Poemranker [20 most recent comments by Entelechist and replies]

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on ~haiku~ by Entelechist 9 Dec 2003, 1:23 AM

Hi Richa,
Thanks for making a comment on this Haiku. I agree with you that a haiku has to be self-explanatory to work, so I won't try and explain the last line. Glad you got some inkling of the sentiments behind it.
Happy scribbling.

replying on <Haiku> by Entelechist 27 May 2003, 3:47 PM

Dark_Angel you belie you moniker. I like this, but the middle line lacks movement which single words
convey......but this is a minor point. Great stuff.