| Re: Extra Strength Tylenol by DurtKL |
13-May-03/5:42 PM |
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Just like the squirrel in the broke-ass car man. That was great.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
13-May-03/6:06 PM |
Although I like the structure and language of the poem, its seems a little Hallmark to me. "You helped me see the Light" has to go. I like the first stanza a lot though. Work in that realm more
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
18-May-03/7:26 PM |
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I really like the imagery of the old dead man, but I don't the the phrase old dead man.
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| Re: hehehe by Freethinker1602 |
18-May-03/9:33 PM |
I've heard enough teenage preachiness
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| Re: I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike |
18-May-03/9:38 PM |
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