Re: Mother Earth by DewDrop	11-Feb-03/2:01 AM
You need to condense the points you are making because the irony you evoke in this poem is very apt. Catherine Zeta Jones in the outback of nicaragua would be a just sentence, liked the point you so nearly made in this _____7
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Feb-03/2:04 AM
Although new to this site I have read this one before and see you have changed it. This piece now has more clarity and it ends on a note of touching epiphany. Please accept a 10 Miss.
Re: "Dreams Come and Dreams Go" by Pooh_N_His_Honey	11-Feb-03/2:09 AM
too much said in a generic narrative here, try avaoiding the obvious descriptions of lament. However keep on trying, writing is a friend of solace >5