on Mother Earth by DewDrop
11 Feb 2003, 2:01 AM
You need to condense the points you are making because the irony you evoke in this poem is very apt. Catherine Zeta Jones in the outback of nicaragua would be a just sentence, liked the point you so nearly made in this _____7
on some deleted poem
11 Feb 2003, 2:04 AM
Although new to this site I have read this one before and see you have changed it. This piece now has more clarity and it ends on a note of touching epiphany.
Please accept a 10 Miss.
Please accept a 10 Miss.
on "Dreams Come and Dreams Go" by Pooh_N_His_Honey
11 Feb 2003, 2:09 AM
too much said in a generic narrative here, try avaoiding the obvious descriptions of lament. However keep on trying, writing is a friend of solace >5