Re: The Queen & The Locksmith by Jeremi B. Handrinos	20-Jan-03/8:31 PM
Liked your second stanza but you lost me in the first - couldn't comprehend lines 4 through 9 and I thought the rhythm was a little stilted in this stanza.
Re: Dr. Skellington by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	20-Jan-03/8:35 PM
Clever.
Re: untitled (readjuster) by pomoxo	20-Jan-03/8:39 PM
I get the feeling there's more depth in this than I'm picking up on. Still, I like what I read.
Re: School. by cleverdevice	20-Jan-03/8:52 PM
Well I cringed when they caught his hand in the door. I thought it was a powerful poem.