Re: Little Bird by Blindpoetry |
21-Dec-03/6:19 PM |
Cute, simple.
I like the feeling of dependancy, coupled with the feeling of want. And all of this expressed with bargaining, but a mutual kind. The kind that is best found with a good friend.
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Re: a comment on The Importance of Mr. Straughter by GregDeEgg |
12-Feb-03/7:59 PM |
Out of curiosity, what do you say the fritter stands for?
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Re: a comment on The Importance of Mr. Straughter by GregDeEgg |
12-Feb-03/6:05 PM |
I really don't like to tell people what the poem means. The fritter could be any number of things.
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Re: Witch to Wicca by Lenore |
23-Jan-03/4:17 PM |
What powerful images. I feel the ritual very plainly. Some questionable lines as far as flow goes, but overall a very powerful piece.
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Re: The Good Old Days in New Orleans by cobalt |
23-Jan-03/4:11 PM |
Very nice. That last line took me aback. I had to re-read it to make sure I read it correctly. Good imaging.
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Re: #16 by mikejedw |
23-Jan-03/4:10 PM |
An interesting image. A contemporary drowsy take on an age old question. The pessimistic wording is what intrigues me the most, as the question is rather cliche.
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