Re: Colloid by skaskowski	8-Jul-02/7:33 AM
As far as freeform goes, this isn't bad. However, the comparisons in the poem aren't really comparisons--they really are those things.
Re: Jericho by goldfish	8-Jul-02/7:49 AM
This is real poetry. Well done. I get so tired of those essays that are divided into lines to look like poetry. It's a pleasure to read a real poem.
Re: Jericho by goldfish	8-Jul-02/7:49 AM
This is real poetry. Well done. I get so tired of those essays that are divided into lines to look like poetry. It's a pleasure to read a real poem.
Re: Unknown Plains by Twisted Wizard	8-Jul-02/7:56 AM
The subject sounds like a nightmare. I pray you'll do what is necessasry to avoid this fate. Also, this is better than freeform. You have many rhymes here. With a little editing this could be really good.