Re: always the end to this good night by nentwined	30-Sep-02/3:45 PM
use more concrete imagery, but I like your style
regarding some deleted poem...	14-Oct-02/1:55 PM
yum
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Oct-02/12:43 AM
i love the words "sugar dumpling" and will use them now whenever I can
regarding some deleted poem...	21-Oct-02/7:54 PM
Maybe the last line..just leave out the "to last all season." "There are comforts enough" (?) The line..."She has spent.." hm, another word for spent? Baked? I dunno. Me likey though. Hm. I love the breadsmelling.
Re: Flamin Monkey's by Blade	23-Oct-02/4:15 PM
Your plural of 'monkeys' should exclude the apostrophes. I like anything with monkeys.
Re: journey to being the top rapper by kliq	23-Oct-02/4:18 PM
good luck at the lucrative world of pro rapping. i heard there's a real market these days!
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Jan-03/11:29 PM
That is fucking amazing. you are a keyboard artist extraordinaire.
regarding some deleted poem...	14-Jan-03/4:02 PM
I think the spelling is "volition". this poem freaked the bejesus from me, as if I haven't lost enough of my bejesus already.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-May-03/1:53 PM
Kind of generic. Could use some more real concrete imagery. What kinds of talk at dinner? What were you eating? WHat did you learn from them? I can't tell here.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-May-03/1:55 PM
I can hear the acoustic guitar in the background.