| Re: Flat by Skamper |
4-Nov-07/5:42 PM |
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| Re: A No One With A Face by calmyourself |
4-Nov-07/3:35 PM |
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OH EM GEE. You should submit this to Poetry.com. You would TOTALLY get this in a book!!!
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| Re: One Past Short Sleep. by Melanie Jade |
4-Nov-07/3:26 PM |
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Spare yourself the trouble. btw, are you related to God? Striking resemblance
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| Re: a bit of theory by pete |
4-Nov-07/2:58 PM |
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The closing metaphor is very well developed. I love this concept. Where I hold no clout in the poetic society, this poem would mean so much more as a persuasive piece instead of an informative. But excellent.
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| Re: Uttered Things by Sasha |
4-Nov-07/2:49 PM |
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I'm reluctant to praise this poem with words. But it is beautiful.
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| Re: Who's on First? by Melanie Jade |
4-Nov-07/2:42 PM |
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Originally, I considered the title "Who's UP first". Strike out?
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