on Flat by Skamper
4 Nov 2007, 5:42 PM
Recycle
on A No One With A Face by calmyourself
4 Nov 2007, 3:35 PM
OH EM GEE. You should submit this to Poetry.com. You would TOTALLY get this in a book!!!
on One Past Short Sleep. by Melanie Jade
4 Nov 2007, 3:26 PM
Spare yourself the trouble. btw, are you related to God? Striking resemblance
on a bit of theory by pete
4 Nov 2007, 2:58 PM
The closing metaphor is very well developed. I love this concept. Where I hold no clout in the poetic society, this poem would mean so much more as a persuasive piece instead of an informative. But excellent.
on Uttered Things by Sasha
4 Nov 2007, 2:49 PM
I'm reluctant to praise this poem with words. But it is beautiful.
on Who's on First? by Melanie Jade
4 Nov 2007, 2:42 PM
Originally, I considered the title "Who's UP first". Strike out?