Re: Leaf on the wind by troll454	15-Sep-02/8:46 PM
A leaf crossed his path and was carried on the wind, would sound better as A leaf crossed his path, carried on the wind
Re: numbskull boomarang by skaskowski	15-Sep-02/9:10 PM
funny i dont know if it has any real significance? is it an allusion to gambling?
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Sep-02/8:05 PM
you should write a story instead of poems.
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Sep-02/12:09 AM
i really dont understand this. man i am dumb. whats the reference to "styx through erebos on a spoon" mean
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Sep-02/8:22 PM
i can see you love bald people. everyone is bald eventually. you love everyone. good for you.
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Oct-02/4:57 PM
ooh. 10 since im from vancouver bay and days dont rhyme.
Re: Francis' Self-portrait by New Life Drug	9-Oct-02/6:44 PM
i really liked this even though it was of a graphic nature